Here is the thing: nearly every piece on Goodness Movement was written in one or two sittings. Those sittings in some cases were 12-15 hour days, but they were of a piece. My psychology being what it is–somewhat fucked up, but with I think significantly above average reality testing, which is a documented positive of depression–I can’t mull these things over, and do them gradually. I have to get them out all at once, or they don’t come out. And one outcome of this is poor editing.
I am trying to fix this. I am trying to implement gradualism in my life, peaceful progress. But it has not happened yet.
I should add, I think, that sometimes I actually don’t care what proper grammar is. I have a style I have evolved that I like. I think anyone who thinks grammar is of intrinsic importance should read Shakespeare and tell me how his prose would be improved with a good editor (because, you know, people reading me immediately think of Billy Boy).
While I’m at it, here is the Keynes piece again: http://www.goodnessmovement.com/files/Download/keynes.pdf
I am going to try again to stop reacting emotionally to stupidity (as I see it) masquerading as knowledge, and grotesque narcissism disguised as philanthropy; at least, I am going to try and stop reacting UNPRODUCTIVELY. That is to say, I am going to try and write one place, and not another; to one audience–me for now–and not the world at large.
We’ll see how it goes.